That. Everything is wrong about that sentence.
Oh and congrats Barack Obama on your win. Your beautiful wife is wearing the same dress as my good friends Sydney Shop Girl and Jess.
I loved your speech. Especially this bit.
“I have always believed that hope is that stubborn thing inside us that insists, despite all the evidence to the contrary, that something better awaits us so long as we have the courage to keep reaching, to keep working, to keep fighting.”